Become a member and get exclusive access to articles, contests and more!
Start Your Free Trial

Ax to Grind

The perils of settling scores in your writing.

Perils of Writing
Add to Favorites

Readers can feel when they’re being manipulated, and they don’t like it. Make a character too pure, and watch readers revolt. An example of this is the death of Little Nell in Charles Dickens’ The Old Curiosity Shop. As Oscar Wilde supposedly said, “One must have a heart of stone to read the death of Little Nell without laughing” – not what Dickens was going for, I suspect.

Sophisticated readers know when an author is trying to force them to like or dislike a character, and they tend to push back. Dickens made Little Nell so utterly pure that her death became a symbol, not of innocence and childhood sacrifice in an uncaring industrial age (as I assume he intended) but of overly sentimental writing.

It looks like you’re out of free articles.

Become a member of The Writer to read this full article.

Already a member? Sign in

Monthly Membership

$3.99/month (billed monthly)
  • Unlimited access to the The Writer website
  • Quarterly livestreams and more

Annual Memberships

Starting at $4.99/month (billed annually)
  • Unlimited access to the The Writer website
  • Print and digital subscriptions of The Writer magazine
  • Free contest entries and more
Advertisement

Premium Access

Join The Writer to read this full article

Become a member for as low as $3.99/month. Unlimited access to our website, free contest entries, and more!

Free Trial Available

Already a member? Sign in

Dismiss Message